Mighty Bright

Posted in cross stitch on 11/27/2010 05:29 am by admin

ur suggestions!!!!!!!!!?

"THE WORLD OF WONDERS"

The mighty mountains touching the sky,
With may birds flying up,high.
Gentle bees on colourful flowers,
So wonderful is the world of ours.

The wonders of world are seven
And are no less than heaven'
Made by human of different kinds,
With varied ideas and different minds.

We people fight with all our mights,
The difficulties arising day and night.
In every mind,let there be light,
To make our wonderful world shine bright.

I must say, this one is better than the other one, but you have a long way to go, and if your writing is any indication, you are very young and have a long time to go that long way. Read the masters, both the ones who rhyme and te ones who don't, read untill you learn what makes it poetry. I'll give you a hint, poetry is not about writing pretty words, it is about writing word prettily. Lesson 1, learn it well,, and lesson 2 will be easier.